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【题目】假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为Chris的外国学生发的帖子，得知他去年，虽语言不通但借助翻译软件的帮助，到几个不同的国家旅游，基本顺利。他疑惑有了翻译软件，今后是不是就没有必要学习外语了。请根据以下提示给Chris留言：

（1）还有必要继续学习外语；

（2）翻译软件的缺点，如准确性及时性，适用场合等等；

（3）掌握外语的好处。

注意：（1）词数不少于100；

（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。

	Translation Apps In,Foreign Languages Out? Posted on May 27th,2020 9:00 PM
	.........With translation apps on hand,I wonder whether learning foreign languages is necessary in the future?

	Reply to Chris Posted on May 27th,2020 16:00 PM
	Hi, Chris,

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Answer 1

【答案】Hi, Chris,

I learned from the forum that you have traveled to several different countries with the help of translation APPs. But you are wondering whether we need to learn a foreign language in the future.

In my opinion, it is necessary for us to learn foreign languages. First of all, translation APPs also have shortcomings. For example, it is not only inaccurate, but also it is not timely enough. There are also some situations in which translation APPs are not available. In addition, mastering a foreign language also has many advantages. By learning a foreign language well, we can not only communicate freely but also feel its cultural charm.

So I think it is necessary for us to learn foreign languages.

Yours,

Li Jin

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求给Chris说明学习外语的重要性。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文。

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法。

要求：

1.还有必要继续学习外语；

2.翻译软件的缺点，如准确性及时性，适用场合等等；

3.掌握外语的好处。

第二步：列提纲（重点短语）

learned from；with the help of；shortcomings；are not available；communicate freely；cultural charm

第三步：连词成句

1.I learned from the forum that you have traveled to several different countries translation APPs.

2.First of all, translation APPs also have shortcomings.

3.There are also some situations in which translation APPs are not available.

4.By learning a foreign language well, we can not only communicate freely but also feel its cultural charm.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

1.表示文章结构顺序：归纳上文；提出观点；最后总结。

2.表示并列补充关系：In my opinion,；First of all,；also

第五步：润色修改