Question

18．以"The Way to Keep Healthy"为题
内容如下：1．有益：新鲜水果和蔬菜，有规律的锻炼，每天睡眠应约八小时；
2．有害：过量的糖果和咖啡，香烟，工作过度劳累．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇开放类话题作文，要求根据所给题目写一篇表达自己观点的作文．注意以下几点：1．仔细阅读题目所给要求，注意题目的话题，；2．不要漏掉题目所给的内容，注意增加细节，加入自己的想法．3．运用多种句型，适当运用一些高级词汇，给文章增色．
【亮点说明】文章语气恰当，无低级错误，文笔流畅，层次分明，运用了高级句式，如 Here are some advice for you to follow．为状语提前的倒装句．同时词汇丰富，如contain包含，do harm to危害，had better not 最好不要，ensure确保．连接词First，but，so的使用使得文章结构清晰．并且表达了自己的观点，如Good habits can help you keep fit．来引起下文．
It's necessary to eat enough fresh fruit and vegetables，because they contain all kinds of vitamin that you need every day．（高分句型一）
Doing regular exercise is certainly a good way to ensure the healthy state of your body．（高分句型二）

解答 The Way to Keep Healthy
       It is very important for us to keep healthy in our everyday life．But how？Here are some advice for you to follow．
      First，you should have a healthy diet．It's necessary to eat enough fresh fruit and vegetables，because they contain all kinds of vitamin that you need every day．（高分句型一） But do not eat too much fat，such as cheese，butter or anything too fatty．Too many sweets can do harm to your teeth．So you had better not eat too many sweets or chocolates and keep off coffee．
      Good habits can help you keep fit．Doing regular exercise is certainly a good way to ensure the healthy state of your body．（高分句型二）After a day's work，an eight-hour sleep is needed．And avoid working or studying too hard．Remember smoking can damage your health，so never smoke．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．