Question

假如你叫周铭，给你的美国网友Paul写一封信，告知他你所在新学校的情况。
信中需包括以下要点。
学校概况：学校人数（约两千），学校环境如何（可自主描述）。
简要介绍所在班级（高一六班）和新同学、新老师情况 尤其是班主任工作认真负责，帮助你在学习上取得了很大的进步。   
你进入高中的感受和打算。
注意：1.词数100字左右 2. 可适当添加内容，使文章衔接顺，内容完整
Dear Paul:
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Yours,
Zhou Ming

Answer 1

How is it going? I’m writing to tell you something about my new school, which I think you must be interested in.
Now I’ve become a senior high school student. My new school is amazing. There are about 2000students studying in it, and the campus is very beautiful with all kinds of trees and flowers. I almost fell in love with it at the first sight. I am in Class 6, Grade one. The teachers here are every enthusiastic, patient and kind-hearted. They are strict with us students but take good care of us. Especially my headteacher. He is a serious and strict man called Mr chen. With his help, I have made great progress in my study. I have been here for two weeks and I have made friends with my classmates, who are lively and hardworking.
Going to a famous university is my goal. Therefore, I will try my best to make progress in all the subjects and do well in exams. I believe my dream will come true!
How is your school life?
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhou Ming

解析试题分析：：这是一篇提纲式作文：题目已经交代的具体情况，也给了适当的要点，因此考生首先要根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，适当增加细节，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
【亮点说明】I’m writing to tell you something about my new school, which I think you must be interested in.这句话用了非限制性定语从句， I almost fell in love with it at the first sight.这句话用了fall in love with和at the first sight 两个词组， They are strict with us students but take good care of us.这句话用了be strict with和take good care of两个词组， He is a serious and strict man called Mr chen. 这句话用了过去分词做定语， I have been here for two weeks and I have made friends with my classmates, who are lively and hardworking.这句话也用了定语从句， Going to a famous university is my goal.这句话是动名词做主语， I will try my best to make progress in all the subjects and do well in exams. 这句话用了try one’s best to do和make progress两个词组。
考点：考查提纲类书面表达