Question

6．假如你是银川一中高一年级的李华，一直以来你的英语口语不好．准备利用周末时间进行提高．请你根据以下要点用英语给外教Harveer写一封信．内容包括：
1．你目前英语口语现状（如英语课堂上、遇到外国朋友时等）
2．请他就如何提高英语口语提一些建议
注意：1．字数：100左右．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Harveer，
I'd like to take the advantage of the weekends to improve my spoken English and I'm writing to ask whether you could do me a favor．
I have had much difficulty in speaking English though I'm good at writing and English grammar．Whatmakes things worse is that my pronunciationis so bad that I have no confidence to speak or answer questions in English class，especially when we have a discussion in group work．What's more，I don't know how to start a conversation in English when I come across foreigners，let alone to chat with them freely．I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on how to improve it and it would be better if you could help me in person．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是银川一中高一年级的李华，一直以来你的英语口语不好．准备利用周末时间进行提高．请你根据以下要点用英语给外教Harveer写一封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：你目前英语口语现状（如英语课堂上、遇到外国朋友时等）请他就如何提高英语口语提一些建议2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：take the advantage of 利用；do me a favor帮我一下；have difficulty in doing sth做…方面有困难；What's more而且；let alone更不要说；
I'd like to take the advantage of the weekends to improve my spoken English and I'm writing to ask whether you could do me a favor．（高分句型一）
What makes things worse is that my pronunciation is so bad that I have no confidence to speak or answer questions in English class，especially when we have a discussion in group work．（高分句型二）
I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on how to improve it and it would be better if you could help me in person．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Harveer，
      I'd like to take the advantage of the weekends to improve my spoken English and I'm writing to ask whether you could do me a favor．（高分句型一）
      I have had much difficulty in speaking English though I'm good at writing and English grammar．What makes things worse is that my pronunciation is so bad that I have no confidence to speak or answer questions in English class，especially when we have a discussion in group work．（高分句型二）What's more，I  don't know how to start a conversation in English when I come across foreigners，let alone to chat with them freely．I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on how to improve it and it would be better if you could help me in person．（高分句型三）
       Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．