Question

20．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏宇符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Steven，
I'm glad that you are coming to Beijing this summer vacation．You asked many question in your letter，and now let me answer them．
To start with，Beijing，the capital of China，is very attractive city with a long history．You can found all kinds of delicious food in Beijing，of that the most famous is the roast Beijing duck．I hope we will enjoy it，Besides，there is a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting，such as the Great Wall，the Summer Palace or the Forbidden City．These scenic spots have attracted millions of tourists in this year．I promise you will have a wonderfully time here in Beijing．
I'm looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible．
Yours，
Liu Chao．

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：本文是Liu Chao给Steven的一封信，信中主要是回答Steven提出的一些问题． 首先，北京是首都城市，它是个有着悠久历史文明的城市．在北京有各种美味的食物，其中最有名的是北京烤鸭．还有很多名胜古迹值得参观，比如长城，颐和园，紫禁城等等．这些景点吸引了许多游客．希望Steven能在北京玩得开心．

解答 Dear Steven，
I'm glad that you are coming to Beijing this summer vacation．You asked many question in your letter，and now let me answer them．
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found all kinds of delicious food in Beijing，of that the most famous is the roast Beijing duck．I
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hopewewill enjoy it．Besides，there isa great of number of tourist attractions worth visiting，
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such as the Great Wall，the Summer Palaceorthe Forbidden City．These scenic spots have
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attracted millions of tourists in this year．I promise you will have a wonderfully time here in
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Beijing．
I'm looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible．
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Yours，
Liu Chao

1．question-questions 考查名词单复数．question是可数名词，前面有many修饰，所以应该用复数形式．
2．very前加a 考查冠词．本句表达的是"北京是一个…的城市"，所以用不定冠词．
3．found-find 考查谓语动词形式．will后面应该用动词原形．
4．that-which 考查定语从句．本句中含有定语从句，在介词后面需要用关系代词which．
5．we-you 考查人称代词．本文是回答Steven的一些问题，作者是对第二人称说的，所以应该用you．
6．is-are 考查主谓一致．本句中的主语是后面的a great of number of tourist attractions，所以要用are．
7．or-and 考查连词．前后的景点是并列关系，所以用and．
8．去掉in 考查介词．今年this year前面不需要介词．
9．wonderfully-wonderful 考查形容词．本句中是用来修饰名词，所以应该用形容词形式．
10．hear-hearing 考查动名词．look forward to是固定短语，to是介词，所以后面应该用动名词作宾语．

点评 改错题要注意代词，连词以及词性、人称的转化．
做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．