Question

16．阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文．
As we all know，life is full of dreams and having a good dream is of great importance in our daily life．Without a good dream，people can't make progress； without a good dream，countries can't develop； without a good dream，the world can't become so beautiful!And I hold the strong belief that everyone，whether he is old or young，poor or rich，junior or senior，does have a good dream!After all，dreaming is certainly a positive part of our life，and wishing for good things，however，costs nothing!
What's more，it is important to fly our dreams，especially for those who are Senior 3 students．It is high time for them to fly their dreams．If they can't let their dreams fly，the dream would just die!
Therefore，it is no wonder that so many people have a dream since their childhood．With a nice dream，China succeeded to host the 29th Olympic Games in 2008； with a nice dream，Hong Kong returned to the motherland peacefully in 1997； with a nice dream，Yuan Longping rids the world of hunger； with a nice dream，Michael Jordon becomes the most popular basketball star； with a nice dream I can stand on this stage to compete in the final English speech contest．And with an aim of achieving success，I must do the best!
So my good friends，if you want to realize your dream，please do not be afraid in face of difficulties or give up in face of failure nor lose your dream in face of pains．You must keep going forward bravely!Just fly your dream highly above the sky!
【写作内容】
1．阅读短文后用30词左右概括短文的要点．
2．就"放飞梦想"为主题，以120词左右发表自己的看法，并包括以下内容要点：
（1）列举自己或身边现实生活中中学生梦想成真的一件事例；
（2）结合自己的实际，谈谈你现在的梦想，并说明打算如何实现．
【写作要求】
1．在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容 但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）Although some of my classmates often went to the movies in the evening，seldom did I take part in such activities．
该句型使用了although引导的让步状语从句，seldom否定副词，使用倒装句；
（高分句型二）Of course，whether my dream will come true depends on my personal efforts．
whether引导主语从句；
高级词汇：motivation 动力；madk up my mind 下决心做；catch up with 追的上； take part in 参加；depend on 依靠；ups and downs起起落落．

解答 Dreams play an important role in our daily life and a good dream is the motivation to success．To realize a dream，one should learn to defeat difficulties through constant struggles as well as persistence．（30个词概括）
　　（列举事例）Like most people，there was a time when I dreamed of being an excellent student in my English after entering junior middle school，though my English was very poor then．To catch up with my classmates，I made up my mind to learn English well and made pen-friends with some foreign students so as to practise my spoken English and improve my written English．（高分句型一）Although some of my classmates often went to the movies in the evening，seldom did I take part in such activities．Instead，I set aside to concentrate on my English and won the Final English Speech Contest around the city this term，realizing my dream．
　　（自己的梦想）Now，I also have a dream．As a Senior 3 student，I hope that I can be admitted to a key university after graduation from middle school．（高分句型二）Of course，whether my dream will come true depends on my personal efforts．Although life is full of ups and downs，I choose to go forward bravely．I strongly believe that where there is a dream，there is hope and there is a way．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．