Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Sam将于今年暑假到长江大学 (Yangzte University) 进行为期半年的中文培训，他想请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据以下信息，给他回一封电子邮件介绍住房情况。

1.面积50㎡左右，一室一厅，一厨一卫；

2.家具齐全，有wifi，离学校近；

3.月租1000元。

注意：

1.词数不少于100；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

Dear Sam,

I’m so glad to know that you’re coming to Jingzhou this summer. ____________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sam,

I’m so glad to know that you’re coming to Jingzhou this summer. I’ve found a flat which I think is perfectly suitable for you.

It’s a fully furnished flat of about 50 square meters, with a small living room, a bedroom, a bathroom as well as a kitchen, which is just one bus stop away from Yangzte University. If you are not well adapted to Chinese food, you can cook your favorite in the kitchen. And a hot shower or a bath in the bathtub must be a release after a whole-day study. In addition to a washing machine, a water heater and air-conditioning, Wi-Fi is also accessible in the flat, making it convenient for you to keep in close contact with your family and friends. Most importantly, the rent is reasonable, just 1000 yuan per month.

Small but convenient, this flat is pretty good for your temporary stay in China. Hope you can enjoy it and have a good time here.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文，文章要点已经给出，在写这篇文章时要注意以下几点：

1.整篇文章时态以一般现在时为主。

2.要点要齐全，但是不要进行简单的罗列，可以采用适当的连接词，或者是表递进关系的副词如Most importantly, 使上下文衔接自然，行文自然流畅。

3.注意语气，此文是写回信的英语短文，所以语气上应该比较诚恳，不应该出现过多的强硬语气的词语。

4.此作文要分四个部分写，每个部分要更完整，最好用简单句与复合句结合的方法写作如If you are not well adapted to Chinese food, you can cook your favorite in the kitchen. And a hot shower or a bath in the bathtub must be a release after a whole-day study.

5.多采用一些高级句型，如 If you are not well adapted to Chinese food, making it convenient for you to keep in close contact with your family and friends. 同时使用一些词组如be glad to，be suitable for，as well as，adapt to，In addition to，convenient for，have a good time 等。

【范文亮点】

提纲性文章难点：提纲性文章难点：扩充成句，因为提纲性文章主题内容已经基本列出，在将短句扩充时，要精炼。其中要注意尽量用高级词汇和复杂句是来表达，如强调句，定语从句等，就如文中It’s a fully furnished flat of about 50 square meters, with a small living room, a bedroom, a bathroom as well as a kitchen, which is just one bus stop away from Yangzte University. 使用的是定语从句。再者就是要多使用一些高级词汇与词组，如be glad to，be suitable for，as well as，adapt to，In addition to，convenient for，have a good time等。最后就是要段落清新，层次分明。就像文中要多使用一些连接词语使衔接自然。