Question

【题目】假如你是高三学生李华，本周是你们学校的文化艺术节( Cultural and Art Festival)。周三你们有幸邀请了四川大学外籍教师Hudson教授给你们上了一节英语课。请你用英语为校报写一篇字数120左右的报道。

要求：

1．简述Hudson教授的上课情况；

2．学生的表现(参与)与评价；

3．对学英语的启示。

Answer 1

【答案】

On Wednesday of this Cultural & Art week, we had the honor of inviting Professor Hudson, a foreign teacher from Sichuan University, to give an English lesson to the students of Grade 3. All the students were deeply impressed by this unforgettable English lesson.

The professor began the class with an amusing English story, which attracted the attention of all the students at once. He spoke slowly and clearly so that students could follow him well. Greatly inspired, most of the students took an active part in his class. After class, many students interviewed sang high praise for his teaching. They said never before had they experienced so interesting a class.

From his lesson, students came to a conclusion that it is not so difficult to learn English if they try various ways.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于新闻报道类，根据提示信息来介绍四川大学外籍教师Hudson教授给你们上了一节英语课。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照他上课的情况和同学的反应进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般过去时。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如插入语a foreign teacher from Sichuan University。定语从句which attracted the attention of all the students at once。还有现在分词Greatly inspired, most of the students took an active part in his class。倒装句They said never before had they experienced so interesting a class。此外，文章还使用了大量短语deeply impressed by 、unforgettable English lesson、 took an active part in 、sang high praise、came to a conclusion等。使语言更加连贯。