Question

【题目】每处错误及修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

As is known to all that millions of graduates crowded into the job market each year. But because the financial crisis, the situation of the employment has become very serious. Consider this, some people suggest graduates should have a lower career expectation, such as working in the western area of China. I in favor of this idea. Firstly, compared with the big cities, the competition is not as fierce there, but graduates can easy get a job. Secondly, the lower position may offer graduate more space. All in all, going to the west may be bring more benefits. Devote yourself to the west, for it is both good for our personal development and for our country at present.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】As→ It

【2】crowded→ crowd

【3】because后加of

【4】Consider → Considering

【5】I后加am

【6】but → so

【7】easy→ easily

【8】graduate→ graduates

【9】be去掉

【10】our →your

【解析】

试题分析：每年会有大量的毕业生涌入就业市场，但是由于经济危机的发生，就业状况变得非常严峻。考虑到这个方面，很多人建议毕业生应该有一个较低的工作要求和预期，比如考虑去中国西北部就业等。

【1】As→ It 考查代词。从结构可知that从句是真正的主语，故用it做形式主语，把As改为It。

【2】crowded→ crowd 考查动词时态。从句中each year可知句子应该用一般现在时，把crowded改为crowd。

【3】because后加of 考查介词。Because后面跟从句，because of 后面跟名词，在becaue后加of。

【4】Consider → Considering 考查介词。此处是considering引导的介词短语做状语，consider 是动词，只做谓语，故把consider改为considering。

【5】I后加am 考查谓语动词。该句中缺少谓语，固定短语：be fond of “喜欢”，在I后加am。

【6】but → so 考查连词。根据前后句内容可知此处是因果关系，故把but改为so。

【7】easy→ easily 考查副词。修饰动词应该用副词形式，把easy改为easily。

【8】graduate→ graduates 考查名词。Graduate是可数名词，此处是泛指概念，应该用复数形式，把graduate改为graduates。

【9】去掉be 考查谓语动词。行为动词bring不和系动词连用，故去掉be。

【10】our →your 考查代词。根据前句内容yourself可知此处需把our改为your。