Question

假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华，你校于10月8日举行了50周年校庆活动。作为学校英语报刊的一名记者，请你根据下列信息为校报写一篇短文，报道此次活动的主要内容。

注意：1．可适当增加细节；
2．词数不少于60。

Answer 1

On October 8th we celebrated our school’s 50th anniversary. A great number of former students and retired teachers came to the celebration.
In the morning, teachers as well as students gave a warm welcome to the guests at the school gate. After that, our headmaster gave a speech about great changes in our school these years, which greatly impressed everyone. Then some students showed the retired teachers around our beautiful campus. In the afternoon, a big party was held. We gave wonderful performances, singing and dancing. All of us enjoyed it very much. In the end, some of the guests donated some books to our school.
Through this activity, I know more about our school and we’re proud to be members of the big family.

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