Question

【题目】5月5日，张学友（Jacky Cheung）终于来扬州了，人气爆棚。针对当前中学生中的追星现象，你班同学展开了一次热烈的讨论，有很多同学赞同，也有不少同学反对。请你根据下表中的提示写一篇英语短文，介绍讨论的情况。

赞同	反对
◇学习负担重,需要娱乐放松。	◇自控力不强，导致无法专注学习。
◇丰富活动，充实课余生活。	◇消耗精力，不利于身心健康发展。
◇了解明星，学习优秀品质。	◇浪费金钱，给父母带来经济压力。
◇你的看法：……

注意：1. 对所给要点，不要简单翻译，可适当发挥。

2. 字数150左右。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：追星star worshiping

On May 5th, Jacky Cheung came to Yangzhou, bursting with popularity. Recently, your class has held a heated discussion about the phenomenon of star worshiping. The opinions are different.

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Answer 1

【答案】On May 5th, Jacky Cheung came to Yangzhou, bursting with popularity. Recently, your class has held a heated discussion about the phenomenon of star worshiping. The opinions are different.

Some students are in favor of star worshiping. Nowadays, students bear heavy study burden and require necessary entertainment and relaxation. Students’ spare time can be made full use of and star worshiping can enrich our activities. Besides, we can know about the stars further and learn some excellent qualities from them.

On the other hand, others hold the opposite view. Lack of self-control makes students unable to concentrate on study. Star worshiping consumes too much energy, which is not beneficial to students’ physical and mental development. In addition, it is a waste of money and might cause economic pressure on parents.

Personally, star worshiping is acceptable. However, we should make it clear who are the real “heroes”. The real heroes are those who are making the most contributions to our society. As middle school students, we ought to learn from them. Only in this way can we become useful persons in the future.

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。针对当前中学生中的追星现象，你班同学展开了一次热烈的讨论，有很多同学赞同，也有不少同学反对。第一段文章已经给出，是引出话题的，第2段给出一些同学赞同，也有不少同学反对的理由。最后一段应该给出自己的看法和观点。

文章内容要点已经给出。但考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：

1. 文章是对某个话题进行议论，一般以一般现在时为主。

2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流畅。

3. 注意文章要以一定的逻辑顺序进行叙述，一定要把各方观点叙述清楚，细节把控要到位。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。

【范文亮点】

优秀词汇和短语： in favor of 支持，bear heavy study burden承担着繁重的学习负担，be made full use of被充分利用，enrich使丰富，concentrate on专注于，Lack of self-control缺乏自我控制，be beneficial to 对 ...有益，ought to 应该。

优秀句式和行文脉络：

1.Students’ spare time can be made full use of and star worshiping can enrich our activities. 这里用一个and并联了两个句子，一个被动一个主动，且主语不同，单是他们都是表达追星的好处，这里句式丰富，观点鲜明。

2.全文运用了Besides，On the other hand，In addition，Personally，However这些连接词是行文流畅。而且全文逻辑清晰，观点鲜明，最后还阐述了自己的观点，作为一篇议论文，这些细节处理的很好。