Question

【题目】根据高二年级指定背诵的写作篇目，默写第六篇。以下是汉语提示。答在答题卡上！

假如你是李华。你的两位朋友Tom与Peter几天前发生了争吵。3月9日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系，修复友情，并特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。请你给Tom回一封邮件，要点包括：

1．礼物选择：

2．你的理由；

3．其它和解建议

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear_Tom，

I'm_glad_to_hear_that_you_are_considering_making_up_with_Peter.If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.

As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally friendly means of transport. It's convenient for him to get around as well.

Apart from giving him a gift, you can also adopt other means, such as travelling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. I really hope that you can be good friends forever.

Best wishes.

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。根据题干可知：假如你是李华，你的两位朋友Tom与Peter几天前发生了争吵。3月9日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系，修复友情，并特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。要求你给Tom回一封邮件，要点包括：1．礼物选择：2．你的理由；3．其它和解建议。

同时要注意以下几点：

1.通篇以一般现在时态为主。

2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。

3.注意语气。既然这是一封建议信，应该委婉地提出自己的建议，并表示两个朋友可以早日和好。

【范文亮点】

1. 文章层次分明，要点齐全，既论述选择什么样的礼物，同时又讲述了理由，同时还提出了其他和解建议，语言生动流畅。

2.此外，文章还运用了＂If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.＂虚拟语气以及“In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship.”非限制性定语从句。