Question

假设美国某中学学习交流团来你校开展联谊活动，学校指定你代表学生会在联谊会上发
言。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍你校概况和丰富的校园生活，并希望联谊活动能加强友谊……
注意：
1．发言稿的开头语已经给出，不计人总词数；
2.可根据内容要点适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；
3．词数120左右。

Answer 1

A possible version：
Ladies and gentlemen,
I feel greatly honoured to be here with the guests from California , USA..Now allow me to express our warm welcome and sincere greetings to our American guests on behalf of the Student Union.
Here I’d like to make a brief introduce to our school. As you can see , our classrooms and science buildings are well equipped , with many trees and tall buildings around them .To make things better , our teachers are devoted and kind –hearted ，Whenever we meet with difficulties , they will come to our help .Besides , we students are all hard-working and always help each other , as if we were a big family.
We have a variety of after-class activities . In our Student Union , we have several , which are founded by students of similar interest . In a word , my school life is bringing me a lot . In the following days we will experience our colorful school life together and hopefully it will become an unforgettable memory in your life .
That’s all .Thank you .

试题分析：本文要求写一篇发言稿。发言稿是为了说明一定的观点态度或某一问题，有着不同的场合和不同的听众，所以语言要口语化，在情感上要具有说服力和感染力，语言上要做到生动感人，尽量做到短而精。发言稿的结构通常包括开场白，正文，结尾三部分，结尾时可以用感谢，展望，鼓舞等语句结尾，使演讲给人留下深刻印象。本文应包括两个要点：一是介绍学校概况和丰富的校园生活，二是希望联谊活动能加强友谊。写作时应注意语言简练，流畅，恰当使用连接词以使文章内容衔接自然。尽量使用多种句式，比如定语从句，状语从句，感叹句，祈使句等，以增加文章亮点。
【亮点说明】本篇范文采用了经典的三段式结构，首段是开场白；中间是正文部分，介绍了自己学校优美的环境，完善的教学设施以及师生的和谐勤奋；末尾提出自己的希望和祝愿，结构上符合演讲稿的写作要求。在文中作者用As you can see使语言比较口语化，听起来亲切自然，拉近了和听众的距离。此外，作者还使用了多种句式，比如状语从句.Whenever we meet with difficulties , they will come to our help；并列句In the following days we will experience our colorful school life together and hopefully it will become an unforgettable memory in your life，和with many trees and tall buildings around them ，to make things better ，In a word 等一些短语，使句子长短结合，抑扬顿挫，增强了语言的感染力，总之这是一篇比较优秀的范文。