Question

书面表达 (满分25分)
假如你是一名大学生，名叫李华。你所在的班级最近就“大学生是否应经济独立”的话题展开讨论，同学们发表了不同的看法。请你根据以下所给内容，写一封信给某英语报社，反映讨论情况。

60%的同学的看法	1.靠自己打工来支付学费会影响学业； 2.现在把精力都用在学习上，将来报答父母的养育之恩；
25%的同学的看法	1.通过打工可以获得工作经验，了解社会； 2.体会父母挣钱不易，从而戒掉乱花钱的坏习惯；
15%的同学的看法 （包括你在内）	觉得双方的观点都有一定的道理，但又不完全赞同； 我个人的看法是……

注意：1．文章的起始句已经给出；         2．词数150左右（不包括起始句）；
参考词汇：报答: repay     学费: tuition    经济独立: financially independent
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a recent discussion our class have had on whether or not university students should be financially independent.
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Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a recent discussion our class have had on whether or not university students should be financially independent.
60% of the students think that university students don’t have to be financially independent, because trying to make money will have a deep influence on their studies. In addition, they think that they can repay their parents in the future.
25% of my classmates hold the view that doing part-time jobs will help one gain work experience and learn more of society. Besides, when students find it hard to make money, they will know it is not easy for parents to earn money and won’t waste their money any longer.
15% of the students, including myself, partly agree with the opinions above. Personally I think that as grownups, we should not depend on our parents any more. However, if our parents can afford to pay the tuition for us, we should put our studies in the first place.
Thank you for reading my letter.
Yours,
Li Hua

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