Question

请根据以下提示，并结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。
You cannot change the weather, but you can change your mood.
注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③词数为120左右。

Answer 1

The weather depends on the sky, but whether you are happy or not depends on yourself.
I can well remember that I didn’t pass the Chinese exam several times last year, so the weater of my sky seemed to be full of clouds. Although the songs of birds were very nice and the flowers were very beautiful, they could not let me escape from depression. What’s more, I felt that I was laughed at by all the other classmates. My Chinese teacher noticed my subtle difference, so she gave me some advice and told me to change my attitude. With the help of her, I tried to face the trouble with a positive attitude. To my surprise, everything changed. It was not long before I made great progress in my Chinese.
Life is full of difficulties. Sometimes you may not be able to decide the situation you are in, but you can change your attitude.

试题分析：题目要求根据所给提示，结合生活事例写一篇短文。首先要理解所给提示的意思；其次可以结合自己生活中的例子进行写作，注意不得照抄提示语。使用第一人称进行写作，注意不要出现拼写和标点错误。要正确运用时态、定语从句、宾语从句、倒装等语法知识。
亮点说明：范文使用了较多的固定搭配和固定短语：depends on, be full of, escape from, laughed at, told me to change my attitude, With the help of her, tried to, To my surprise, long before, made great progress in等，使作文内容变得充实，有说服力；
范文还使用了一些重要的语法知识：让步状语从句Although the songs of birds were very nice...；表语从句I felt that I was laughed at by all the other classmates；定语从句the situation you are in等，这些长难句都是亮点，也是加分点；
范文注意使用so, What’s more, With the help of her, To my surprise等来衔接上下文，使作文语意连贯、衔接紧密。