Question

【题目】假定你是李华。暑假将至,你们的英语老师让大家写一篇英语短文，谈一谈暑假学习计划。请你根据以下提示，写你的短文。

1.完成假期作业；

2.参加英语角活动；

3.读几本英语读物。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】My summer holidays are just around the comer, and I am so happy that I could have more than two months to relax myself!

Since I will be a third - year senior high student next term, however, much of my time will he spent in study, though it is a time of rest. First of all, I’ll try to finish all the homework as it is required by my teachers. I am still very weak in English, so I will spend more time in learning English. There is a very good English comer in the People’s Park, so I will go there every day to practice my oral English. Also, I will try to read some easy English readings recommended by my English teacher. I’m sure it will do me a lot of good.

That’s my study plan for the summer holidays, and I’ll try my best to carry it out.

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。根据提示写出你的暑假学习计划。

第一段需要概括一下暑假的总体情况，并且引出暑假计划，第2段按题中所给的中文提示扩展开写出文章的主体部分内容。可以按顺序写，也可以不按提示中的顺序写，但是一定要把三点内容都写出来。可适当加上自己实际的暑假计划。最后一段再次总结自己的暑假。

文章内容要点已经给出。但考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 时态要以一般将来时为主。2. 要点要齐全，也可加入其他暑假计划。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，（first of all，so ，also）使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流畅。3. 注意一定要把每个计划扩展开，将计划中的细节把控要到位。否则会显得内容不够丰满。

【范文亮点】

重点短语与句型：

... are just around the comer ...将至；

First of all首先；

I am sure...我相信 ...;

do me a lot of good.对我大有益处;

I’ll try my best to carry it out.我会尽我所能去实现它。