Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录你和同学参加“助力冬奥，畅享冰雪”为主题的快乐滑雪活动的全过程。

注意：1. 词数不少于60;

2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词：滑雪场 ski resort

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Answer 1

【答案】With the approach of Winter Olympics, more and more people begin to try winter sports. Last weekend, my classmates and I decided to enjoy the snowy fun. Absolutely delighted, we enrolled in a training class. Arriving at the ski resort, our trainer gave us specific instruction in safe and skillful skiing. He was so careful and helpful that it didn’t take long to get ourselves on the trail. At first, we were all scared to take the first step in our skis. When we saw others having so much fun, we set out. Although we had several falls, none of us gave up. With great efforts, we were able to keep balance and ski more confidently. We played happily and felt a sense of achievement.

To record the exciting moment, we took many pictures. We hope, in 2022, we can work as volunteers in Winter Olympics.

【解析】

本文是看图作文。

本篇书面表达属看图作文。第1步：假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录你和同学参加“助力冬奥，畅享冰雪”为主题的快乐滑雪活动的全过程。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：With the approach of Winter Olympics（随着冬奥会的靠近）；enjoy the snowy fun（享受雪的乐趣）；specific instruction（具体的指示）；felt a sense of achievement.（感到一种成就感）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。