Question

【题目】假设你是光明中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一些优秀学生，利用暑期到星光希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：

对此活动的认识（如对本人、学校及社会的益处等）

个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等）

你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等）

注意：1.词数80词;

2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯;

3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。

参考词汇： 星光希望小学Xing Guang Hope School

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior One .__________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

Yours Sincerely

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior One. I’m writing to apply for the opportunity to help the students inXingGuang Hope School with their English. Thus, they can improve their English during the summer vacation. Meanwhile, I can learn how to get along with the students and benefit the whole school.

I’m kind, easy-going and always ready to help others. I wash clothes and make beds by myself to develop independence. English is my favorite subject and I’ve won several prizes in English contests. So I think that I’m qualified for the position.

I plan to communicate with the students first to know what they need. Besides, I’ll try to get them more interested in English by telling stories, singing songs, playing games and so on.

I’d appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求根据提示写一封申请信。文章应包括对活动的认识，个人优势以及计划等要点，本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

【亮点说明】本篇范文结构合理，涵盖了所有要点。第一段写了对此次活动的认识，第二段是作者本身的优势，第三段是对活动的计划。作者在范文中使用了较多的高级词汇和短语，比如get along with, benefit, independence, communicate with等；另外作文中还使用了很多连贯词，比如thus, meanwhile等。这使文章更加连贯顺畅。