Question

假如你是成都七中的学生叶子，你的网友Peter听说美国第一夫人米歇尔(Michelle Obama)访问了你的学校，他想了解当时的情况。请按照以下要点给Peter回一封邮件。
1. 具体情况：1）发表演讲并与学生互动；2）与40名学生上了一堂英语课；
3）参与了一节太极课。
2. 发表自己的感想。
注意：1．词数100左右；     2．可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好； 4. 参考词汇：太极------ Tai Chi
Dear Peter,
In the last letter, you’d like to know something about Mrs. Obama’s visit in our school.                                              
Yours sincerely,
Ye Zi

Answer 1

Dear Peter,
In the last letter, you’d like to know something about Mrs. Obama’s visit in our school. Now, I am writing to share some information and my feelings with you.
Mrs. Obama began her visit by giving us a speech, during which she told her own stories, highlighted the importance of education and interacted with us. Then /Afterwards, she participated in an English class with 40 students and had a lively discussion on varieties of topics including how students can deal with competition and failure, the value of studying abroad. What impressed me most is that she observed and actively participated in a Tai Chi class.
Although the First Lady did not spend a long time here, her visit really impressed me and made me know more about American education and culture. I sincerely hope that our school can organize more cultural exchange activities like this to broaden our horizons and enrich our lives.
Yours sincerely,
Ye Zi

考察提纲类作文
【写作指导】
本文属于提供类短文，叙述米歇尔(Michelle Obama)访问成都七中的情况。因为叙述的是过去发生的事情，所以使用一般过去时。因为本文是以考生自己的口吻写的，所以使用第一人称。要点：1）发表演讲并与学生互动；2）与40名学生上了一堂英语课；3）参与了一节太极课。4）自己的感想：米歇尔的来访让我们感受到了美国文化和教育的特点，希望能够有更多的这样的文化交流活动。写作时首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【一句多译】
1.Michelle Obama在开始的时候给我们发表了一个演讲，在这次演讲里，她讲述了自己的故事，强调了教育的重要性并和我们进行了交流。
①Mrs. Obama began her visit by giving us a speech, during which she told her own stories, highlighted the importance of education and interacted with us.
②Mrs. Obama began her visit by giving us a speech. In the speech she told her own stories, highlighted the importance of education and interacted with us.
2.给我留下深刻印象的是她还参加了一节太极课
①What impressed me most is that she observed and actively participated in a Tai Chi class.
②It impressed me most that she observed and actively participated in a Tai Chi class.