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第一节 基础写作 (共1小题;满分15分)
【写作内容】
目前,越来越多的青少年参加各类电视节目的才艺表演(talent shows)。对此,中学生的看法各有不同。
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展示才艺,增加社会经验;
增强自信;
有利于学生全面(overall adj.)发展。
模仿多,没有自己的风格;
沉迷于“明星梦”,无心学习;
有上当受骗的危险。
【写作要求】
必须用5个句子表达全部的内容;
将5个句子组成连贯的短文。
【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
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At present an increasing number of teenagers are taking part in all kinds of TV talent shows, about which students’ opinions are divided. Some think that it is a stage to show their talents of art, contributing to their social experience and build up their confidence. What’s more, it’s good for their overall development. However, other students hold the different opinion / view that the teenagers are just imitating others rather than showing somethng original and that they don’t have their own style. Besides, some are too lost in pursuing stars to concentrate on their studies and some of them are in danger of being cheated by others.

试题分析:这是一篇以表格的作文,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。注意表格的内容,对于才艺表演有不同的看法,先说别人的观点,然后再阐述自己的观点。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化,尤其是数字的不同表达法。
【亮点说明】因为题目要求用五句话表达,所以范文长句居多: At present an increasing number of teenagers are taking part in all kinds of TV talent shows, about which students’ opinions are divided. 这句话用 定语从句,Some think that it is a stage to show their talents of art, contributing to their social experience and build up their confidence. 这句话用了现在分词做状语, other students hold the different opinion / view that the teenagers are just imitating others rather than showing somethng original and that they don’t have their own style. 这句话用了同位语从句, some are too lost in pursuing stars to concentrate on their studies and some of them are in danger of being cheated by others.这句话用了too…to…结构。What’s more, However, Besides,这样的关联词,使文章更加连贯。还有范文还使用了词组:taking part in参加, concentrate on 专注于,in danger of有…危险。
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