Question

11．假如你是李华，你的朋友王强最近因英语口语不好而苦恼．请你根据以下提示，给他写一封信，提出你的看法和建议．
1．课上，积极发言；课下，多交流；
2．勇于展示自我，不怕被嘲笑；
3．坚持不懈，终会进步．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Wang Qiang，
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble with spoken English．
Don't worry!Here is some of my advice on how to improve it．
First of all，nothing is better than drills．Therefore，in class you'd better seize every opportunity to express your ideas，while after class it's a good idea to communicate with your classmates in English．Keep in mind practice makes perfect．Besides，don't be afraid of making mistakes and being laughed at by others．On the contrary，be confident and brave to show yourself．Finally，it is the persistence that will make a difference to your spoken English．In other words，as long as you keep on speaking English，you are sure to make progress in spoken English．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是李华给朋友王强写的一封信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一写明书信目的；二学习英语口语的看法和建议．高分句型：1．Therefore，in class you'd better seize every opportunity to express your ideas，while after class it's a good idea to communicate with your classmates in English．句子里r seize every opportunity to表示"抓住每一个机会去做"；while表达对比关系，翻译成"然而，同时"；it做形式主语，代指 to communicate with your classmates in English．因此，在课堂上抓住每一个机会去做表达自己的想法，同时课下多和同学用英语交流是一个好主意．2．Finally，it is the persistence that will make a difference to your spoken English．句子里it is…that是强调句式，强调主语 the persistence； make a difference to时固定短语，表示"对某事有影响"．最后，坚持不懈会使你的英语有进步．

解答 Dear Wang Qiang，
     I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble with your spoken English．Don't worry!Here is some of my advice on how to improve it．（写明书信目的）
    First of all，nothing is better than drills．Therefore，in class you'd better seize every opportunity to express your ideas，while after class it's a good idea to communicate with your classmates in English．【高分句型一】Keep in mind practice makes perfect．Besides，don't be afraid of making mistakes and being laughed at by others．On the contrary，be confident and brave to show yourself．Finally，it is the persistence that will make a difference to your spoken English．【高分句型二】In other words，as long as you keep on speaking English，you are sure to make progress in spoken English．（学习英语口语的看法和建议）
                                                       
 Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．写作时，在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来．表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误．