Question

2．阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文．
What can you do when you are unhappy？If you want to let out your anger or pressure by breaking things，you just do．Now a school in Nanjing has built a"stress wall"to help students who feel unhappy due to heavy schoolwork or for other reasons．
The leader of the school said the idea of a stress wall started when footprints were found on some newly painted walls and some school windows were broken．
"These things happen because some students feel lots of pressure from their studies or because they don't get along well with other students．When under stress，the body gets ready to either run or fight and becomes very nervous．Hitting the wall can help relax the body and take away stress，"he said．
"Tests and homework make me sad，"said a junior girl，"I can't wait to hit the wall．It will help me a lot with my problems．"However，another girl student who wouldn't give her name said，"The wall won't help because it can't talk，"and she added，"I need to talk to someone when I'm sad．"
【写作内容】
1．以约30个词概括这段短文内容；
2．以约120个词就"Should the stress wall be bulit"主题发表你的看法，包括以下要点：
（1）学生的压力来源；
（2）是否该建此墙并说明理由；
（3）提供一些其他有效的减压方法．
【写作要求】
1．可以参照阅读材料但不得直接引用原文的句子；
2．作文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称．
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）students are under great pressure，mainly coming from their school work as well as peer relationship．
该句使用coming from现在分词做定语，使用了非谓语动词．
（高分句型二）For another，this may lead to the results of solving a problem with violence of fixing a bad temper，which has bad effects on their health growth．
which引导一个非限制邢定语从句，which指代前面句子内容．
高分句型三）it is strongly suggested that we can take part in some sports events，which can surely help students out of stress and improve their health at the same time．
该句使用了it isstrongly suggested that 意思是据建议这个主语从句句型．
（高分句型四）only when we let out the stress properly can we live a happy school life．
在这个句子了使用only+when时间状语从句，主句使用倒装句．
还有重要短语如：As far as I am concerned就我所知；for one thing…for another一方面，另一方面；
lead to 导致；have effects on对…有影响．

解答 The passage conveys to us that to help students with stress，a school built a"stress wall"for students to relax，towards which students hold different opinions．
   Nowadays，（高分句型一）students are under great pressure，mainly coming from their school work as well as peer relationship．As far as I am concerned，building a stress wall is not appropriate．（列举理由）For one thing，even if students punch the wall heavily，the true stress in the bottom of their hearts can not be let out．（高分句型二）For another，this may lead to the results of solving a problem with violence of fixing a bad temper，which has bad effects on their health growth．
    In order to decrease our stress，here are my suggestions．（我的建议）To begin with，we can design more outdoor activities for students to get rid of the stress．What's more，（高分句型三）it is strongly suggested that we can take part in some sports events，which can surely help students out of stress and improve their health at the same time．All in all，（高分句型四）only when we let out the stress properly can we live a happy school life．

点评 该书面表达为读写任务型作文，该篇作文规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．