Question

5．假定你是李华，暑假期间在温哥华旅游时借宿在朋友Rachel家，请根据下列提示，写一封电子邮件谢谢她的招待．
1．谢谢Rachel一家的热情款待和照顾；
2．感谢Rachel陪你练习英语口语．
注意：1．词数120左右．
2．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Rachel，
I am writing to thank you for your warm hospitality when I was in Vancouver．
It was very kind of you to offer me a comfortable and clean room in your house when I was in Vancouver．I like the delicious food cooked by Mrs Rachel，which made my journey more unforgettable．【高分句型一】Hopefully，I can have the chance to taste it in the future．（谢谢格林先生和夫人的热情款待及照顾）
In addition，I really appreciate your practicing oral English with me and I have made great progress in my spoken English．【高分句型二】The stay in Vancouver has greatly enriched my experience and widely broadened my horizon．（感谢他们陪你练习英语口语）
I really hope you can come to China for a visit when it is convenient for you．（欢迎他们来中国旅游）
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封感谢信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般过去时态来叙述他们对自己的关爱．内容主要有：一 点名写信目的；二 谢谢格林先生和夫人的热情款待及照顾；三 感谢他们陪你练习英语口语；四 欢迎他们来中国旅游．
高分句型：
1．I like the delicious food cooked by Mrs Green，which made my journey more unforgettable．句子里which引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句表达的这件事．
我喜欢格林夫人做的菜，这让我的旅行更加难忘．
2．In addition，I really appreciate your practicing oral English with me and I have made great progress in my spoken English．句子里In addition表示"此外"，和上一段进行递进；appreciate one's doing表示"感激某人做了某事"； make great progress 表示"取得很大进步"．
此外，我真的感激你陪我练习口语，我的口语取得很大进步

解答 Dear Rachel，
      I am writing to thank you for your warm hospitality when I was in Vancouver．（ 写信的目的）
      It was very kind of you to offer me a comfortable and clean room in your house when I was in Vancouver．I like the delicious food cooked by Mrs Rachel，which made my journey more unforgettable．【高分句型一】Hopefully，I can have the chance to taste it in the future．（谢谢格林先生和夫人的热情款待及照顾）
      In addition，I really appreciate your practicing oral English with me and I have made great progress in my spoken English．【高分句型二】The stay in Vancouver has greatly enriched my experience and widely broadened my horizon．（感谢他们陪你练习英语口语）
      I really hope you can come to China for a visit when it is convenient for you．（欢迎他们来中国旅游）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．