Question

【题目】假如你是李华,你们班最近就校园安全问题组织了一个主题班会,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,

谈一谈你对这个主题的看法。短文应包括下面的内容:

1.加强学生安全意识的重要性;

2.在校内外活动中应注意哪些安全并举例。

3.谈谈你自己的看法。

注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 2.词数120左右; 3.文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。

My dear classmates,

Recently our class has discussed about how to make our campus a safe place to stay on.

Answer 1

【答案】

My dear classmates,

Recently our class has discussed about how to make our campus a safe place to stay on. I consider this as indeed a good practice, which will make us aware that safety should always come first in our daily life, whether when we stay at school or outside it. When we are doing sports, we should attach importance to the safety and avoid being hurt. Furthermore, when we get into trouble with our classmates, we should remain calm and avoid any form of fighting, which may only bring suffering and pain to us mentally and physically.

As far as I’m concerned, I feel all the students and teachers should work hard and create a safe environment for us.

Thanks.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一片发言稿，介绍班会的情况。大部分的要点都已经给出，考生要根据要求做适当的扩展，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。运用furthermore之类词，让语句结构富有逻辑。此外，文章还使用了大量短语consider as, come first, attach importance to, as far as I’m concerned,等。