Question

假设你是某中学的学生李津。你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席,你欲参选，必须写一篇演讲稿。

[写作内容]

请按以下提示,写一篇竞选演讲稿。

竞选职位：学校英语俱乐部副主席 个人优势: （1）性格外向、与人相处融洽           （2）善于组织各种活动 中选后决心：协助主席，服务同学 中选后设想：举办讲座、英语晚会、英语演讲比赛等活动来提高同学英语水平，激发学习兴趣 表达愿望：希望同学们投票选你，相信你能干好工作

参考词汇:副主席vice president　竞选run for

[写作要求]

1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。

2．短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总句数。

[评分标准]

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

Good afternoon, my dear friends,

My name is Li Jin.  

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   Thank you.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Good afternoon, my dear friends,

My name is Li Jin. Today I am very glad to have the chance to run for the vice president of the English Club. Concerning this position, I feel qualified for the job because I am outgoing, getting on well with others, and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities. If I am lucky enough to be the vice president, I will try my best to assist the president and serve my fellow students. In order to improve our English and make more students interested in English, I intend to organize some activities such as lectures, English parties, English speech contests and so on. I sincerely hope you will vote for me and please believe that I will be a good vice president.

Thank you.

【解析】

试题分析：试题贴近考生实际生活，给出的要点比较简略，主要围绕英语俱乐部选举新一届副主席的情况，写演讲稿，要点很细，属于提纲类作文，需要注意遣词造句，在写作时注意把握好以下几点：(1)书写规范，卷面整洁。(2)行文紧凑，过渡自然。(3)要点完整，表达清楚。(4)语法正确，时态准确。(5)用词无误，选用词组和各种句型和语法，(6)认真复查，胸有成竹。

【亮点说明】(1)使用一些如run for参加竞选，be qualified for合格的，胜任的，vote for投票赞成，这样的词组。句式上也富有变化：Concerning this position, I feel qualified for the job because I am outgoing, getting on well with others, and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities.这句话用了现在分词， In order to improve our English and make more students interested in English, I intend to organize some activities such as lectures, English parties, English speech contests and so on. 这句话用了不定式做目的状语。

考点：考查演讲稿的写作