Question

假设你是某中学的学生李华，最近收到美国朋友Joy的电子邮件。他在三年前参观过你校，听说你校现在变化很大，希望了解发生了哪些具体的变化。请你根据下表提示，给他回一封电子邮件。

三年前	一座教学楼，一个操场，学生1000多人
现在	1. 校园扩建：新建了一座教学楼和一座图书馆，教学楼内有音乐室、美术室、微机房等； 2. 学生人数：增加到了2000多人； 3. 体育设施与音乐器材配备齐全； 4. 绿化了校园。

 

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

参考词汇: 体育设施 sports facilities  装备 equip

Dear Joy,

I was pleased to hear from you and I’m writing to tell you something about the changes in my school.

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                                                             Yours,

                                                             Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Joy,

I was pleased to hear from you and I’m writing to tell you something about the changes in my school.

As is known to you, great changes have taken place in my school. It is no longer what it used to be three years ago, when there was only one teaching building and a playground. Now two new buildings have been built and are in use. One of them is a new classroom building, in which there are rooms for music, art and computer teaching. The other is the library, where there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. Besides, my school is well equipped with sports facilities and musical instruments. The number of students has also grown from 1,000 to 2,000. What’s more, we have planted a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.

I believe my school will become better and better, and I hope you will visit my school again.

                                                            Yours,

                                                            Li Hua

【解析】这是一封介绍学校变化的信，内容贴近考生生活，考生有完成该作文的兴趣和能力。要求考生根据所给中文提示，准确表达，在描述的时候，适当运用高级的词汇和句型，使文章句式多样化。句子与句子之间使用恰当的连接词，使文章更加连贯，自然