Question

假设今天是十月一日（星期一），天气晴朗，你和全班同学到南郊公园（NanJiao Park）游玩，请根据以下内容提示，以日记的形式讲述今天你的出游情况。
1. 上午乘车1小时到达目的地，爬山、唱歌、做游戏；
2. 中午吃完午餐后组织一个小活动，向游客宣传环保的重要性；
3. 下午4时返回。
注意：1. 词数：100左右；  
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Answer 1

Monday October. 1^st.                                        Sunny
It's a nice day. My classmates and I went to NanJiao Park for fun. I think I'm supposed to say that I have never had so happy a day!
We arrived at the beautiful place in the morning. It took us around 1 hour by bus. Then we can't wait to go to the mountains. We also sang songs and played games together during the hiking. After lunch in the noon, we organized an activity in order to announce the importance of protecting the environment to tourists. We went back at 4.
It's really great!

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。