Question

18．A survey about middle school students'health made by your group of exploring study shows that the general health of middle school students is declining year by year．Please write a short passage about the reasons for this and your suggestions to solve the problem．
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Answer 1

分析 本文为开放式作文．根据对英语提示的理解写一篇短文．首先简单描述中学生健康状况下降的现象，然后分析原因，最后提出解决的建议．基本时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
亮点部分
The survey shows that the general health of middle school students is declining year by year，with more people having the problem of overweight．（高分句型一）句中运用了that引导的宾语从句和with的复合结构
One of the reasons could be that they have a heavy load in their study so that they seldom do physical exercises or labor work like housework．（高分句型二）句中运用了that引导的表语从句和so that 引导的结构状语从句

解答 The survey shows that the general health of middle school students is declining year by year，with more people having the problem of overweight．（高分句型一）（描述现象） One of the reasons could be that they have a heavy load in their study so that they seldom do physical exercises or labor work like housework．（高分句型二）What's more，many of them don't have a balanced diet．（分析原因）
    To solve the problem，I suggest that we students should not chat on line so often in order to have enough sleep time and we should do sports for at least one hour a day．（高分句型三） Besides，we'd better eat more or fruits and vegetables and refuse junk foods．（提出建议）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．