Question

6．In your spoken English class，your teacher shows you the following picture．You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
By taking responsibilities，we can be more and more capable．Without responsibilities，we can't live a qualified life．
通过承担责任，我们会越来越有能力．没有责任，我们无法过有质量的生活．
高分句型二：
If we're not diligent，we can neither support ourselves nor achieve our goals．
如果我们不努力，我们既不支持自己也无法达到我们的目标．

解答 As is vividly showed in the picture a cat is addicted in the temptation of fish while a mouse is carrying a generation of rice secretly run away．This is an easy but very important story，telling us that we have to focus on the responsibility we should bear，and then the things great enough in the world．If the cat is not tempted by food，forget its own responsibilities，the mouse will not escape．
Anyone can't avoid taking responsibilities when he is alive．By taking responsibilities，we can be more and more capable．Without responsibilities，we can't live a qualified life（高分句型一）．
As far as I'm concerned，responsibilities include three aspects in our life：First，we must work hard．If we're not diligent，we can neither support ourselves nor achieve our goals（高分句型二）．Second，we must take care of our parents，since they have brought us up．We must pay back the love to them．If we don't treat our parents well，maybe we'll be abandoned by our children when we're old．Third，we must keep on learning，because our life is an infinite book．We're always reading at the first page of this book．If we don't go on learning，we can't keep pace with the times．
These are my opinions that I will act as I say．I believe my life will be more colorful if I do my best to fulfill my responsibilities．

点评 这是一篇开放式作文，也是看图作文，认真读图，可知图画反映了人们对待同样问题的不同看法，写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．