Question

11．本文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除和修改．增加：把缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误极其修改均限一词.2．只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不记分．
Mr．Smith had a 8-year-old son named Tony，who enjoyed listening to music very much．So he bought a piano to Tony，hoping that he can become a famous pianist one day．The little boy put her heart into practising the piano day after day and seemed enjoy every minute of it．However，half a year later，he told his father that he was tiring of practising the piano．Heard this，Mr．Smith said，"Tony，it is one thing to be fond of listen to music，but it is another thing to perform skillful by yourself．You can never play the piano well even if you don't practise more．"

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介绍了Smith先生引导儿子Tony学钢琴的情况．

解答 Mr．Smith had a 8-year-old son named Tony，who enjoyed listening to music very much．
So he bought a piano to Tony，hoping that he canbecome a famous pianist one day．The
little boy put her heart into practising the piano day after day and seemed∧enjoy every minute
of it．However，half a year later，he told his father that he  was tiring of practising the piano．
Heard this，Mr．Smith said，"Tony，it is one thing to be fond oflistento music，but it is another
thing to perform skillful by yourself．You can never play the piano well even if you don't practise more．"
详解：
1：a 改为an    考查不定冠词   此处用来修饰单数名词son，表示泛指一个八岁的孩子，由于eight首字母的发音为元音/e?/，故用不定冠词an．
2：to改为for   考查固定搭配    buy sth for sb 意为：给某人买某物；故用for．
3：can改为could   考查时态    根据上下文都使用了一般过去时可知，此处讲述的是过去发生的事情，故用could．
4：her改为his     考查人称代词的一致性   put one's heart into doing sth．意为：对…全力以赴，一心一意做…，由于此处的主语是那个男孩，故用his．
5：在seemed后加to  考查固定搭配   seem to do意为：好像做某事；这里指的是：他好象很享受每一分钟；故在seemed后加to．
6：tiring改为tired        考查固定短语    be tired of 表示对…厌烦，厌倦做某事；此处的意思是：他告诉他的父亲他厌倦了弹钢琴；故用tired．
7：Heard改为Hearing   考查现在分词    此处在句中作状语，由于动词hear与其逻辑主语Mr．Smith 是主谓关系，故用现在分词Hearing．
8：listen改为listening      考查动名词   此处用在介词of之后作宾语，故用动名词listening．
9：skillful改为skillfully    考查副词    此处用来修饰动词perform，故用副词skillfully．
10：去掉even    考查句意理解以及从属连词   本句的意思是：如果你不多加练习，你就永远弹不好钢琴；Even if 即使，if 如果，此处用来引导条件状语从句，意为：如果，故去掉even．

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．