Question

18．你校组织了一个去美国交流学习的活动，你应选参加，请按以下提示写一篇词数100左右的短文，介绍你赴美学习、生活的体会．
1．第一次离开祖国，拿到签证（visa）很开心．
2．适应新生活很不易；寄居在美国人家里，请教我不会的习语（idiom）．
3．受益匪浅，强烈推荐．
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Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息写一篇词数100左右的短文，介绍你赴美学习、生活的体会，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：第一次离开祖国，拿到签证（visa）很开心；适应新生活很不易；寄居在美国人家里，请教我不会的习语（idiom）；受益匪浅，强烈推荐． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：It was the first time that I had ever left my motherland．（高分句型一）本句使用了It was the first time that句型，注意使用过去完成时
You have to adjust to a new life，which can take up all your concentration in the beginning．（高分句型二）注意句中使用了非限制性定语从句
   Finally，I highly recommend this activity for it's very beneficial to us．（高分句型三）句中for为连词，引导原因状语从句

解答 It was the first time that I had ever left my motherland．（高分句型一）After getting my visa，I was very excited because I had dreamed of this day for long．
     It's not just study that's difficult．You have to adjust to a new life，which can take up all your concentration in the beginning．（高分句型二） I chose to board with an American family．I could ask my host family when I came across an idiom I didn't understand．I got along very well with them and I'll never forget the time I spent with them．
     Finally，I highly recommend this activity for it's very beneficial to us．（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．