Question

10．"Please put your phone down Daddy，we haven't finished the story!"Hearing these heartfelt words from my four year old daughter was an uncomfortable wake up call．How had I let the shiny electronic box in my hand take so much of my attention that it could even interrupt a short bedtime story with my precious children？
It's no exaggeration to suggest that our mobile devices are in danger of taking over our entire lives．Time magazine found that 68% of users take their devices to bed with them，20% check their phones every ten minutes and one third report feeling anxious when briefly separated from their beloved gadget．According to Osterman research，79% of respondents take their work-related device on vacation and 33% admit to hiding from family and friends in order to check Facebook and Twitter．It's hard to deny that these are worrying trends．

【写作内容】用大约30字概括上文和图表的主要内容；
1 结合上述信息，用大约120字论述：
（1）科技的发展是否意味着人们生活更幸福．（选择"是"或"否"并论述你的观点）
（2）你认为在生活中应当如何处理人和科技的关系．
【写作要求】
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句； 
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 
3．不必写标题．

Answer 1

分析 根据要求可知，1用大约30字概括上文和图表的主要内容；2 结合上述信息，用大约120字论述：（1）科技的发展是否意味着人们生活更幸福．（选择"是"或"否"并论述你的观点）（2）你认为在生活中应当如何处理人和科技的关系．注意可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯，语句通顺，同时注意正确运用时态语态，合理事业高级词汇和高级句型．
亮点说明    A father's concern that smartphone is depriving him of his precious family time does not stand alone．句中运用了同位语从句
   However，no pains，no gains．使用谚语为文章增色
  The world evolves as human technology leaps forward，along whose process there is bound to be sacrifices．whose引导非限制性定语从句
  With digital devices booming around，we are given so many choices that our minds have been freed to a degree our ancestors could never anticipated．with的复合结构
  That being said，to make sure technology doesn't get in the way，you need to unplug from the information highway and share your journey with your family and friends from time to time．运用现在分词作独立主格结构

解答 A father's concern that smartphone is depriving him of his precious family time does not stand alone．（高分句型）Favorable opinions as there are，the majority of Americans today view technology as hazardous．（31 words）
【选"是"】However，no pains，no gains．The world evolves as human technology leaps forward，along whose process there is bound to be sacrifices．（高分句型）The definition of happiness may vary，but a more connected，convenient，and creative society is undeniably nothing a modern man wouldn't have desired．With digital devices booming around，we are given so many choices that our minds have been freed to a degree our ancestors could never anticipated．（高分句型）
That being said，to make sure technology doesn't get in the way，you need to unplug from the information highway and share your journey with your family and friends from time to time．（高分句型）A balance between man and computers will lead to an ultimate happiness．（115 words）
【选"否"】True，a high-tech world seems a new Eden，but it won't last any longer than the old one．Putting down their phones，lifting up their misty eyes，and waking up at night，people suddenly realize that，with all their family living by，they are alone．（高分句型）Children forgot how and why they should return their parents'love because it were never given； classic literature is left rotten on the shelves because no one bothers to look away from their screen．
To stop yourself getting"high"instead of"happy"，read a book，go outdoors，or simply pay a visit to your parents．（高分句型）There are things to pursue in life other than thumbing up tweets．Enjoy a tech-free day and see what real happiness means．（122 words）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．