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15．近年来许多名校成为旅游景点，这引起了广泛的公众关注．为此你班展开有关"Should university campuses be open to tourists？"的讨论．请你根据下表所提供的信息，给China Daily报社写一封信，介绍讨论情况并发表白己的看法．

反对者	影响在校学习的学生，分散其注意力；大量游客涌入校园，会带来安全隐患．
赞成者	拉近学生和社会距离，利于文化交流；一些大学已成为社会文明的象征，应该让人们去感受那里的气氛．
你的建议/看法	…（至少谈两点）

注意：1．词数：150左右．信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计人总词数；
2．短文须包括表中的全部内容，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Editor，
Recent years have witnessed the fact that campuses of famous universities have become one of the popular tourist destinations，which has aroused great public concern．
                                                           
Best regards，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，根据提示信息讨论"Should university campuses be open to tourists？"写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从反对者和赞成者及个人观点三个方面来讨论该话题 2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether the university campus should be open to tourists．（高分句型）
Worse still，with so many tourists entering the campuses，some safety problems will probably arise．（高分句型）
They insist that this can bring students and society closer together and is good for cultural exchange between people．（高分句型）Besides，some universities have become a symbol of social civilization and people should be allowed a chance to experience the atmosphere．（高分句型）

解答 Dear Editor，
     Recent years have witnessed the fact that campuses of famous universities have become one of the popular tourist destinations，which has aroused great public concern． I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether the university campus should be open to tourists．（高分句型）
    Some students argue that tourists should be denied access to university campuses．They think the tourists visiting the campuses will make it harder for students to focus on their studies．Worse still，with so many tourists entering the campuses，some safety problems will probably arise．（高分句型）
    However，others hold opposite opinions．They insist that this can bring students and society closer together and is good for cultural exchange between people．（高分句型）Besides，some universities have become a symbol of social civilization and people should be allowed a chance to experience the atmosphere．（高分句型）
    In my opinion，several factors should be considered before opening university campuses to tourists．First，campuses should only be open to tourists on weekends or during holidays．Second，the number of tourists should be strictly limited to guarantee safety．（150 words）
                                                      Best regards，
                                                        Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．