Question

假定你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。请按要求写一篇短文，主要内容包括：

1 乐观的人生态度

2 努力学习

3 参加体育锻炼

关键词：态度 attitude 乐观的 positive

                                                                                   

                                                                                      

                                                                                     

 

Answer 1

【答案】

We all want to grow up happily and healthily,and for this goal we must do several things.

Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times.We should be brove in front of difficulties.secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power.If we have the power,we can help to build our country and enjoy life better.In order to study well,we need to do sports so that we can keep fit.We can go running ,play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study.If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.

【解析】

试题分析：本文较为简单，是关于健康成长的短文，要点很简单，留给考生发挥的余地较大，考生可以根据自己的个人感受做适当的发挥。在写作的时候，要使用合适的连接词firstly, secondly来连接全文。也要使用高级的词汇如consist of等提高文章的文采。

考点：考查半开放性作文

点评：本文的话题较为简单，要求也不高。考生可以从心理和生理的健康发展两个方面着手，培养乐观的人生态度，参加体育锻炼，增强体质。在写作的时候要运用多种句型让文章充满变化，提升文章的层次。