Question

阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Two University of Colorado professors said they have demonstrated(证明) the teachers’ use of red pens in marking corrections and grading papers often affects students negatively and destroys teacher-student relationships.

News. Com. Au and ABC Science reported a paper by University of Colorado sociologists Richard Dukes and Healther Albanesi documenting their new study was published in The Social Science Journal, and that some educators have expressed doubt about the team’s findings.

The Colorado study suggested that because red is an “emotive” color expressing an exciting emotion, corrections penned in red ink were more likely to be seen by students as “shouting”, an “emotional loading” that could cause anxiety or feelings of blame against the teacher and lead to rejection of otherwise constructive feedback. Instead, teachers should use blue pens to mark papers, Richard Dukes and Healther Albanesi concluded.

ABC Science reported that students whose papers were graded with blue ink tended to give teachers higher scores.

But a University of British Colombia study published in the journal Science found both blue and red affected motivation and performance, with red attracting attention and blue increasing creativity, Science Daily reported.

【写作内容】

以约30个词概括上文的主要内容；

以约120个词就老师批改学生作业的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：

简述老师用红笔批改学生作业的利与弊；

谈谈你对老师用红笔批改学生作业的看法；

作为中学生，我们应该如何配合老师批改作业？

【写作要求】

作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

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Answer 1

This passage states a study about whether teachers’ usual use of red pens in marking corrections and grading papers could have bad effects on students. The opinions are obviously different.

Generally speaking, most teachers mark corrections or grade students’ papers in red pens. Some people think it may make students anxious thus blaming their teachers. However some people think it can attract students’ attention. As for me, I am used to correcting or grading my assignments in red pens, so it makes no difference whether my teachers use red pens or blue pens. If teachers can give us comments on the corrections, we will benefit a lot.

What’s more, teachers check over our assignments every day, which is a good bridge for us to communicate with each other. In this case we can learn from our errors, get encouragement and make progress in our study. So we will respect our teachers’ hard work, no matter whether they use red pens or not.

【解析】

试题分析：考查议论性作文，议论性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】范文中出现很多常见的词组：Generally speaking一般来说； am used to doing习惯于做某事； makes no difference 没有影响，没有关系；In this case在这种情况下； make progress取得进步；have an effect on sb 对某人有影响。This passage states a study about whether teachers’ usual use of red pens in marking corrections and grading papers could have bad effects on students.在这句话中运用about后面带有一个由whether引导的宾语从句，and连接mark, grade并列并且形式保持一致。it makes no difference whether my teachers use red pens or blue pens这个句子中it是形式主语，真正的主语是whether引导的主语从句。What’s more, teachers check over our assignments every day, which is a good bridge for us to communicate with each other，which引导非限制性定语从句。

考点： 提纲类作文