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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

American talk show hostess Oprah Winfrey is the “Queen of Talk Show”, which open and warm-hearted style put her way ahead of her competitors. Winfrey interviewed many people including politicians, entertainers or criminals. In her show, she also made it know that she had been struggling with her weight.

What made Oprah so popular is her passion for inspiring her audience live their “best life”. He encourages people to believe in themselves and help the others. This earned her much attention and countless award. Her success has not just been on the screen, which led her to start her own company and her shows started being international televised, she also gave out millions to various charities.

Oprah’s influence go far beyond her show.

Answer 1

【答案】1. 第一行which改为whose;

2. or改为and;

3. know改为known;

4. live前加to ;

5. He改为She;

6. 去掉the;

7. award改为awards;

8. international改为internationally;

9. out改为away;

10. go改为goes

【解析】文章介绍了著名脱口秀主持人Oprah Winfrey对人类的巨大贡献和深远影响。

1. which改为whose. 考查关系代词。句中包含定语从句，先行词是Queen of Talk Show指人，在定语从句中作定语修饰style，指她的风格，用whose引导。故which改为whose.

2. or改为and.考查连词。句中politicians, entertainers , criminals三者是并列关系，不是选择关系。指她采访过许多人，包括政治家、演艺人员和罪犯。故or改为and.

3. know改为known.考查过去分词。句中it 和know是被动关系指让它被知道，用过去分词表被动作宾补，故know改为known.

4. live前加to .考查不定式。 此处指她鼓舞她的观众过最好的生活的热情，此处是不定式表目的，指鼓舞的目的是过最好的生活，故live前加to .

5. He改为She. 考查代词。文中主人公Oprah Winfrey是女性，故He改为She.

6. 去掉the. 考查冠词。the others表示某一范围内的其他的，此处没有范围限制泛指别人，故去掉the.

7. award改为awards.考查名词。此处award是可数名词指奖项。由countless修饰用复数形式，故award改为awards.

8. international改为internationally. 考查副词。此处修饰动词televised用副词，指国际性地被电视直播，故international改为internationally.

9. out改为away. 考查动词短语。give out 分发，发表，用尽；give away放弃，赠送。此处指她捐献几百万用于各种慈善，故out改为away.

10. go改为goes.考查主谓一致。句中主语是influence是不可数名词，谓语动词用第三人称单数，故go改为goes.