Question

【题目】假设你叫李华,听说即将来你校任职的外籍教师David需要一名学生助手,你想自荐做他的助手。请你用英文写一封自荐信,要点包括:

1.写信目的;

2.你作为助手的优势;

3.表达期待。

注意:1.词数:100左右;

2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear David,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear David,

I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Students’ Union. It’s great to learn that you are coming to teach in our school as an oral English teacher next semester.

I was asked to write to you, recommending myself, a Senior 2 student, aged 17, to be your assistant. I’m a diligent student, who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. What’s more, I’m an expert at spoken English and always ready to help others in need. I am confident that I can he helpful in your work and life in China. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.

I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封自荐信，自荐做他的助手。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.写信目的;

2.你作为助手的优势;

3.表达期待。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

grateful; ask to; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Students’ Union.

2. It’s great to learn that you are coming to teach in our school as an oral English teacher next semester.

3. I was asked to write to you, recommending myself, a Senior 2 student, aged 17, to be your assistant.

4. I’m a diligent student, who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others.

5. What’s more, I’m an expert at spoken English and always ready to help others in need.

6. I am confident that I can he helpful in your work and life in China.

7. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.

8. I’m looking forward to your coming.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改