Question

【题目】每个人都有失败的经历。请以此为主题写一篇100左右的文章。要求:

1.回忆自己的一次失败。

2.反思失败的教训。

注意：1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

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Answer 1

【答案】 A failure in my youth, a lesson a whole life, that is what I experienced in this fiercely hot summer!

Regarded as the most intelligent child in my family, I, from the very beginning of my education, always treated examinations as pieces of cakes. Frankly, the journey of my schooling was so smooth that I became pretty overconfident and as a punishment, I lost the most important one, that is, NMET.

It is a painful lesson, but a priceless one. Without stormy seas he could not make himself a true man. With this faith I decided to set out freshly once again, for my dream and future!

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类作文。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，每个人都有失败的经历。请以此为主题写一篇100左右的文章。要求:1.回忆自己的一次失败。2.反思失败的教训。第二，人称以第一人称为主。第三，时态为一般现在时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，总述自己的失败经历。第二段，回忆自己的一次失败。第三段，反思失败的教训。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: priceless， failure，experienced，painful lesson， treated examinations as pieces of cakes，overconfident，set out，so...that，decide to do sth。

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:what 引导的表语从句A failure in my youth, a lesson a whole life, that is what I experienced in this fiercely hot summer! 过去分词作状语Regarded as the most intelligent child in my family, I, from the very beginning of my education, always treated examinations as pieces of cakes.so...that 引导的结果状语从句 Frankly, the journey of my schooling was so smooth that I became pretty overconfident and as a punishment, I lost the most important one, that is, NMET。

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: Frankly，Besides, Finally。

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。