Question

目前，许多学校存在部分学生抄袭作业现象。现在就这个话题谈谈自己的看法。
主要原因：作业量大、偏难；对功课不感兴趣、懒惰；完成任务，取悦老师。
个人看法：抄袭不对，违反校规；要诚实，勤奋学习；有困难可以请教老师和同学。
注意：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥。 
2. 短文标题与开头已写好，不计入总词数。    
3. 词数：150 左右。
My opinion on copying others’ homework
As is known to us all, some students copy others’ homework.___________
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Answer 1

My opinion on copying others’ homework
As is known to us all, some students copy others’ homework.
As students, we have to do plenty of homework both at school and at home, but sometimes we have too much homework which is too difficult for us. On the other hand, some students are lazy, and are not interested in their lessons, nor do they work hard. So in order to finish the homework and please their teachers, some students copy others’ homework.
In my opinion, it is wrong to copy others’ homework because it breaks the rules of the school. We should be honest and try to finish our homework by ourselves instead of by copying. If you have trouble doing your homework, you can ask your classmates or teachers for help.

试题分析：本文的写作首先对存在的作业抄袭的现象进行说明As is known to us all, some students copy others’ homework.然后对学生抄袭作业的原因进行分别说明，作业量大、偏难have too much homework which is too difficult for us；对功课不感兴趣、懒惰；完成任务，取悦老师So in order to finish the homework and please their teachers, some students copy others’ homework.这样的表达都恰到好处的表现了作者的语言功底。进而表达自己的观点，并提出我们应该诚实，尽我们自己最大的努力来完成作业We should be honest and try to finish our homework by ourselves instead of by copying.最后表达如果有问题可以多问老师向老师寻求帮助ask your classmates or teachers for help.
点评：本文属于主旨类文章，在写的过程中首先对存在的现象进行说明，然后表达自己的观点。对于普遍存在的现象可以用as we all know,来总起句子，发表自己的观点时注意层次的把握，运用“起承转合”的连词来表达各点，同时利用平时积累的各类表递进、并列的连词来使文章富于活力。在平时的练习中要多去背诵范文，对表达好的句子，短语要进行积累，并默写，考试前再集中看一下，这样做到有备无患。