Question

【题目】假设你是银川一中高二(1)班的学生李华，你的英国笔友Jack刚转入一所新学校，感到一切都很陌生。他在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境。请你根据以下信息回信。

1.多跟同学交流沟通；

2.积极参加学校活动；

3.向老师寻求帮助。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jack,

I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful.

First, I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible. In this way, you will get to know each other better. Second, it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships. Lastly, faced with some tough problems, you might consider asking your teachers, who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions.

I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you. If there is anything more I can do to help, please let me know.

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本题是要写一封信，是应用文。注意条理要清晰，逻辑顺序和结构要恰当，同时要尽量保持简洁精干的内容，不拖泥带水。要注意题中所给的信息，不可偏题，应用文写作对于文章内容的要求是要达到写作目的。尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。

【亮点分析】

第一句是宾语从句I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school. 很遗憾听到你适应新学校有点问题。第三句是一个which引导的非限制性定语从句Second, it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships. 第二，参加一些可能含有团队合作和与其他同学有交流的活动可能对你来说是一个好主意。这样对你发展友谊有好处。第四句是一个who引导的定语从句。Lastly, faced with some tough problems, you might consider asking your teachers, who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions.最后，面对一些困难问题，你可能考虑问问你的老师，他们可能会给你一些感性的建议。第三段第二句是一个if引导的条件状语从句。If there is anything more I can do to help, please let me know.如果还有我可以帮忙的事情，请一定通知我。