近十几年里.各种自然灾害频繁发生.如洪水.地震.风暴.雪暴.沙尘暴袭击很多地区．某英文杂志就此问题广泛征集稿件．请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿．1．灾害发生时.断电停水.车辆被困等.导致人们生活不便,2．数千万人和动物丧生,无数房屋.交通道路被毁, 3．灾后.灾区人民在解放军战士的帮助下积极重建家园, 4．作为中学生.谈谈你的� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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3．近十几年里，各种自然灾害频繁发生，如洪水、地震、风暴、雪暴、沙尘暴袭击很多地区．某英文杂志就此问题广泛征集稿件．请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿．（开始部分已写出）
1．灾害发生时，断电停水，车辆被困等，导致人们生活不便；
2．数千万人和动物丧生；无数房屋，交通道路被毁；
3．灾后，灾区人民在解放军战士的帮助下积极重建家园；
4．作为中学生，谈谈你的感想和打算．
注意：1．词数：100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3．参考词汇：PLA soldiers
For over ten years，varieties of natural disasters have occurred frequently．For instance，                ．

分析本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息写一篇英语短文投稿，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从不同观点和理由两个方面来讨论该话题灾害发生时，断电停水，车辆被困等，导致人们生活不便；数千万人和动物丧生；无数房屋，交通道路被毁；灾后，灾区人民在解放军战士的帮助下积极重建家园；作为中学生，谈谈你的感想和打算．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：What's more，thousands of vehicles get caught/stuck/trapped by the disasters，causing huge amounts of economic loss and inconvenience to the citizens．（高分句型一）句中causing huge amounts of economic loss and inconvenience to the citizens属于现在分词作结果状语
Only in this way，can we grow by sharing and helping．（高分句型二）句中only+状语句子使用半倒装结构

解答     For over ten years，varieties of natural disasters have occurred frequently．For instance，floods，earthquakes，windstorms，snowstorms and sandstorms have stricken many areas．
    When the disasters occur，many aspects are affected．First of all，the water supply and power are cut off．What's more，thousands of vehicles get caught/stuck/trapped by the disasters，causing huge amounts of economic loss and inconvenience to the citizens．（高分句型一）More seriously，millions of people are killed，countless houses and roads are destroyed as well．
    Fortunately，after the disasters，the people in the disaster areas try their best to rebuild their homes with the active helps of others，especially the PLA soldiers．
    As a middle school student，I believe we should study hard and offer our helps to those really in need．Only in this way，can we grow by sharing and helping．（高分句型二）

点评英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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