Question

以“My friend XXX”为题，写一篇短文。包括以下要点：
名字，性别，外表简单描述。
兴趣爱好。
你们在一起的情况。
他/她的家庭情况。
总结。
要求：1）词数：100左右；      2）字迹工整，卷面整洁。
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Answer 1

Zhang Dong is my best friend. He entered our class last term. He is a boy. He has short straight, black eyes and a small nose. so we often have a talk in English in our spare time. After school, we often play football together on the playground.
He is an excellent student. He not only gets good marks in all subjects but also is very kind and modest. He is fond of music.
There are three people in his family and he is the only child. His father is a doctor and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress. Though Zhang Dong's family is wealthy, he is usually simply dressed.
Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy. He is highly praised by the teachers and students.

试题分析：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】这篇范文观点明确，要点齐全，句式富有变化：He has short straight, black eyes and a small nose. so we often have a talk in English in our spare time. 这句话是并列句和原因状语从句， He not only gets good marks in all subjects but also is very kind and modest.这句话用了not only…but also….， He is fond of music.这句话用了词组：be fond of“喜欢”Though Zhang Dong's family is wealthy, he is usually simply dressed. 这句话用了让步状语从句， Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy.这是一个倒装句。