Question

【题目】最近，你班就高考后的暑假打算展开了一次讨论。有的想打工挣钱以便继续到大学学习；有的打算学习一门技术去挣钱养家；有的想和同学一起去旅游。你想在家陪家人呆2周放松身心，然后去自己喜欢的上海去看看，以便选择一个喜欢的大学在那里继续学习。这个暑假对大多数同学而言就意味着新生活的开始。

要求：1. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息;

3. 词数: 120个左右。

We’re going to finish our middle school in June after the important College Entrance Examination. Recently, our class has a heat discussion on what to do in this real summer holiday.

Answer 1

【答案】

We’re going to finish our middle school in June after the important College Entrance Examination. Recently, our class has a heat discussion on what to do in this real summer holiday. With no stress on study, we can do anything we dream of all the time. Some want to do temporary jobs to earn money for college study. Some would like to learn some kinds of skills, like a hairstyle designer, a cook, a driver etc. so that they can have a better job. Some students are going to visit some places of interest. As for me, I’d love to stay at home with my family for two weeks, doing nothing but sleep and relax. Then I plan to visit some universities in Shanghai so as to go on my further education there. This summer means a new beginning to many middle students. Therefore, all of us are looking forward to its coming.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇话题作文，首先要说明班会讨论的结果，高考后的暑假计划。提笔前要考虑以下几个方面：1. 时态应该以一般将来时为主 ；2.人称：用第一或第三人称。3.可以合理想象，注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。4.适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。

【亮点说明】本文运用了一些较高级的词汇和短语，如temporary jobs，As for me ，doing nothing but等；还有定语从句anything we dream of all the time，和so that 句式等。