Question

【题目】阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

As many as one in seven recent graduates in Britain may have cheated by using essay mils (论文工坊) during the last four years, according to a recent study. Essay mills, also known as “constrict cheating”, refers to companies offering essay-writing services for a fee which is hard to-spot since the essays are written by humans or even tailored. Some British universities have seen' decline in transitional plagiarism (剿窃) but this is now being replaced by constrict cheating, figures show.

Experts have warned that essay mills have become more common, not only in Britain, but also across the world in recent years, with labor being outsourced to unemployed university graduates in counties like Kenya, India and Pakistan. Dr. Irene, academician manager at Coventry University and vice president European Network for Academic Integrity, said these figures are just the tip of the iceberg since so many instances go unnoticed. She added that students are being “bombarded (轰炸)” with advertisements for essay mills on social media as well as on campus.

The number of students using essay mills at different British universities

[写作内容]

1.以大约30词概括所给文字和图表的内容；

2.简述“论文工坊”可能造成的影响(至少两点)；

3.就如何应对“论文工坊”，提出你的建议(至少两点)。

[写作要求]

1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3.不必写标题。

[评分标准]

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】Essay mills have been uncovered as a new global way of academic cheating in universities,especially in Britain, where the number of students involved have multiplied in the last four years, greatly concerning educational experts.

The rise of essay mills does great harm to the development of students as well as the universities concerned. Students who take such a shortcut don't really acquire the knowledge and skills standardized for their graduation and future work. Therefore, the reputation of the universities will be spoiled in the long term, less able to carry out their functions of education and research.

In my opinion, essay mills must be cracked down on. First and Foremost, universities must introduce; new strategies accordingly to strengthen supervision and regulation. Meanwhile, the government is supposed to provide legal support and technological assistance. Last but not least, students should remember“no pains, no gains", trying to resist the temptation and develop their awareness of honesty and striving.

【解析】

这是一篇读写任务。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1.以大约30词概括所给文字和图表的内容；

2.简述“论文工坊”可能造成的影响(至少两点)；

3.就如何应对“论文工坊”，提出你的建议(至少两点)

第二，人称为第三人称。第三，时态以一般现在时主。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段以大约30词概括所给文字和图表的内容。第二段，简述“论文工坊”可能造成的影响(至少两点)。第三段，就如何应对“论文工坊”，提出你的建议(至少两点)。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语：academic cheating, do great harm to, take such a shortcut, acquire the knowledge and skills standardized for their graduation and future work, carry out, strengthen supervision and regulation, resist the temptation.

第四步：确定较为高级的句子：who 引导的定语从句Students who take such a shortcut don't really acquire the knowledge and skills standardized for their graduation and future work.现在分词作状语Last but not least, students should remember “no pains, no gains", trying to resist the temptation and develop their awareness of honesty and striving.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接：Therefore, First and Foremost, Meanwhile, Last but not least.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。