Question

假设下面四幅图画描述了你们班Lily和Lina在上学路上发生的一幕。请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，词数不少于60。

    注意：1. 短文必须包括图画的主要内容，并简要发表个人观点。

          2. 提示词：救护车ambulance

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:   

    One day, Lily and Lina were going to school happily when a speeding car ran into them. One of them was seriously injured and lay on the street, unconscious. Seeing the terrible scene, the driver drove his car away as fast as he could without stopping. At the very moment, some passersby rushed over. One man called 120 to get help. Minutes later, an ambulance came with a siren wailing. The injured girl was carried into the ambulance by a passerby and sent quickly to hospital.

    From the story we can see such people as the guilty driver should be punished by law. We do believe there are many more warm-hearted people in our society.

【解析】本文是最近比较流行的看图作文，对考生的要求比较高，需要考生有很强的读图理解和组织语言的能力。通过审题确立要点以及文章的基本时态为一般过去时。要点分为：两个人开心上学；一辆车撞上了他们，司机逃逸；路人打120急救车。受伤的人被送往医院，最终得救。最后再发表个人观点。在写作时要注意选用高级词汇，并使用合适的连接词和高级句型，让文章更上档次。