Question

【题目】你校校长李建想邀请你校交换生Peter的父亲Smith作为颁奖嘉宾参加你校新学期的开学典礼，现请你代他写一封邀请信，主要内容包括：

1．发出邀请；

2．活动安排；

3．你的看法；

4．联系方式：fgvert. school@yahoo. Org/010-34532225。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr Smith

I’m honored to invite you to attend the opening ceremony of the new term, which is to be held at 8 on the morning of Sept. 1 (next Monday) in our school meeting hall. And we expect you to work as a guest who presents awards to students. While being there, you can not only get involved in our educational activities but also witness the growth of your child. I firmly believe it’s a good opportunity to strengthen the relationship between our school and parents.

Would you be so kind as to tell me whether you could come in advance? For more information, please send email to fgvert. school@yahoo. org or call at 010-35432225.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Jian

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文，文章要点已经给出，在写这篇文章时要注意以下几点：

1.整篇文章时态以一般现在时为主。

2.要点要齐全，但是不要进行简单的罗列，可以采用适当的连接词，或者是表递进关系的副词如For more information使上下文衔接自然，行文自然流畅。

3.注意语气，此文是写邀请信的英语短文，所以语气上应该比较诚恳，不应该出现过多的强硬语气的词语。

4.此作文要分四个部分写，每个部分要更完整，最好用简单句与复合句结合的方法写作如I’m honored to invite you to attend the opening ceremony of the new term, which is to be held at 8 on the morning of Sept. 1 (next Monday) in our school meeting hall.

5.多采用一些高级句型，如we’d better wear masks when we go outside，It’s one of the most dangerous weather conditions，同时使用一些词组如not only...but also ， be honored to，held at，between and等。

【范文亮点】

提纲性文章难点：提纲性文章难点：扩充成句，因为提纲性文章主题内容已经基本列出，在将短句扩充时，要精炼。其中要注意尽量用高级词汇和复杂句是来表达，如强调句，定语从句等，就如文中“I’m honored to invite you to attend the opening ceremony of the new term, which is to be held at 8 on the morning of Sept. 1 (next Monday) in our school meeting hall. ”使用的是定语从句。再者就是要多使用一些高级词汇与词组，如文中not only...but also ， be honored to，held at，between and等。最后就是要段落清新，层次分明。就像文中要多使用一些连接词语使衔接自然。