Question

下面是一副漫画，题目是“妈妈请的家教”。请你描述一下这幅漫画所表达的主题以及感受或想法。
注意： 1 词数： 100左右；
2 短文第一句已经给出，不计入总词数。3 参考词汇： 鹅 goose

The Tutor Mother Invited
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Answer 1

The Tutor Mother Invited
This is a funny and instructive picture.In the picture we can see the mother hen invites a tutor – a goose to teach her baby chickens to swim. It is known to all that birds like chickens can’t swim at all. But the mother hen wants her babies to learn to swim following the tutor. We can imagine the final result. 
Nowadays, many parents are treating their children like the mother hen. They expect their sons and daughters to become famous when they grow up. However, they don’t know about their children’s interests and advantages. So they invite kinds of tutors to teach their children what they dislike or they are not good at. Finally they do harm to their children.

试题分析：传统的“书面表达”题要求书写的内容都由试题决定，无需考生自己编拟。而这篇属于开放性作文，需要考生根据试题所提示的要求立意，确定文章的中心思想。同学们可自由发挥自己的想象力，猜想几种情况。由漫画可以看出，一只鹅在教一只小鸡游泳，鸡妈妈在旁边一直叮嘱孩子好好学。本幅图极具讽刺意味，漫画通常是讽刺或抨击社会上的不好现象或不良社会风气。据此，可将鸡妈妈类比为广大父母亲，小鸡类比为孩子们，盲目教学是是不科学的，不合理的，这样做会严重限制孩子的发展和成长。
点评：写作时注意使用一些句子如It is known to all that--； We can imagine the final result等 2.以第三称写作，时态以一般现在时为主 3.注意使用恰当的连接词，让文章过渡自然。