Question

假如你是高三学生李华，近期你们学校组织一次关于“有烦恼向谁说”的调查活动，调查结果如下表所示。请用英语简要介绍一下调查结果及理由并谈谈自己的想法。

注意：
1、词数150左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Recently a survey—Who Do You Turn to When You Are in Trouble?
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Answer 1

Recently a survey—“whom do you turn to when in trouble？”was carried out in our school．Here are the results. Most of the students, about 60%,turn to their classmates or friends for help when they have problems. They think it is easier for them to communicate with  each other because they are the same age. One third of the students like to tell their troubles to their teachers or parents who  have rich experience  and are worthy of their trust. Only 10% of the students solve their problems all by themselves. They are unwilling to talk to others and are not able to get along with their classmates. They have few friends.
As far as I am concerned, I prefer to go to my parents for advice and  help，since they know me well. Besides this, they can also provide me with some practical suggestions.

试题分析：这是一篇给类似调查报告的作文，也是提纲类作文，主要内容已经给出，就是让我们有烦恼都向谁来诉说。给材料作文的写作首先要做到的就是不遗漏要点，如是反映要点内容。再就是应该注意表述的逻辑性和条理性。尽量用简单的语言来表述。我们首先要认真阅读调查结果，罗列出要点，确认写作应用的时态，人称及主要单词，短语或固定的句型结构。
【亮点说明】They think it is easier for them to communicate with  each other because they are the same age. 这句话用了it做形式主语，One third of the students like to tell their troubles to their teachers or parents who  have rich experience  and are worthy of their trust.这句话用了定语从句和词组be worthy of sth， They are unwilling to talk to others and are not able to get along with their classmates. 这句话用了be unwilling to do，和get along with两个词组， I prefer to go to my parents for advice and help，since they know me well. 这句话用了原因状语从句，还有范文还使用了As far as I am concerned, Besides this,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。。