Question

14．下学期，你们学校将引进一名新的外教，学校针对需要引进什么样的外教，以及如何利用好外教资源向在校师生广泛征求意见．请你以学生李敏的名义，给负责该项目的黄老师写一封电子邮件，提出你的建议，并陈述理由．邮件须包含以下内容：
•你对引进什么样外教的建议及理由；
•你对如何利用好外教资源的建议及理由．
Dear Mr．Huang，
I'm a student of senior three and myname is Li Min．Knowing that you are taking charge of the recruit of a foreignteacher for our school，I'm now writing to you to state some of my opinionsabout this matter．
With regard to the qualities of theforeign teacher，there are two aspects that we should place great importanceon．First of all，being humorous and imaginative are necessary for the teacher，which enable the class to be enjoyable and lively．For another，tomaintain the efficiency of teaching and learning，the foreigner's abilitytospeak Chinese is important，since it is certain that sometimes students cannotexpress themselves in English．
So as tomake full use of the foreign teacher resources，a variety of outdooractivities，such as English Evening and English Corner，can be held by theforeign language teacher，which provides the students with more opportunitiesto communicate with the teacher and to improve their oral English．
I will bedelighted if you can take my advice into account．Thank you．
Sincerely Yours，
Li Min
注：邮件中不得提及你的真实姓名或学校．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一封邮件，就学校针对需要引进什么样的外教，以及如何利用好外教资源的问题给负责该项目的黄老师提出自己的建议并陈述理由．
写作时人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
写作要点：1．对引进什么样外教的建议和及理由；2．对如何利用好外教资源的建议及资源．
重要短语：take charge of（负责），with regard to （关于），place greatimportance on sth （重视某事），enablesb to do （能够让某人做某事），maintain theefficiency of （保持…的有效性），be under control （在控制，掌握之中），in advance（提前），be of great importance （有重要性），so as to （为了），make full use of （充分利用），a variety of（各种各样的），provide sb with sth （提供某人某物），communicate with…（与…交流），take sth intoaccount（把…考虑在内）．
【高分句型】
1．Knowing that you are taking charge of the recruit of a foreign teacher for our school，I'm now writing to you to state some of my opinions about this matter．
这里是由现在分词+宾语从句作原因状语，主句为"I'm now writing to you to state some of my opinions about this matter"，主句的主语为I，与所给动词know存在逻辑上的主动关系．
2．With regard to the qualities of the foreign teacher，there are two aspects that we should place great importance on．
这里是由that引导的定语从句，先行词为aspects，that在定语从句中作宾语．
3．being humorous and imaginative ①are necessary for the teacher，②which enable the class to be enjoyable and lively．
①这里是由动名词作主语，谓语动词为are，表语为necessary for the teacher．

②这里是由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在定语从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．


4．it is certain that sometimes students cannot express themselves in English．


这里是由it引导的形式主语，此句为主语从句，结构为"It is certain that+句子"，意为"可以肯定的是…"．

解答 Dear Mr．Huang，
     I'm a student ofsenior three and my name is Li Min．Knowing that you are taking charge of therecruit of a foreign teacher for our school，I'm now writing to you to statesome of my opinions about this matter．【高分句型】（开头-写信目的，引出话题）
     With regard to thequalities of the foreign teacher，there are two aspects that we should placegreat importance on．【高分句型】First of all，being humorous and imaginative are necessary for the teacher，which enable the class to be enjoyable and lively．【高分句型】Foranother，to maintain the efficiency of teaching and learning，the foreigner'sability to speak Chinese is important，since it is certain that sometimesstudents cannot express themselves in English．【高分句型】（开头-写信目的，引出话题）
So asto make full use of the foreign teacher resources，a variety of outdooractivities，such as English Evening and English Corner，can be held by theforeign language teacher，which provides the students with more opportunitiesto communicate with the teacher and to improve their oral English．【高分句型】
I will bedelighted if you can take my advice into account．Thank you．
                                                                    Sincerely Yours，
                                                                     Li Min

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．