Question

情景作文

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，近日你班同学参加了世界自然基金会WWF组办的“我为哥本哈根减斤碳”活动，大家开始在日常生活中减少能源、纸张等的消耗。请根据以下四幅图提供的信息，给某英文杂志写一篇以“Low – carbon Living”为题的英文稿件，介绍你们参加此次活动第一天的具体做法。

注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。

2．词数不少于60。

 

Low – carbon Living

Recently, my classmates and I participated in the activity of Low – Carbon Living organized by the WWF. On the first day                                                           

                                                                                 

                                                                                

                                                                                

                                                                                 

                                                                                

                                                                                

                                                                                 

                                                                                

                                                                                

Answer 1

One possible version:

Low – carbon Living

Recently, my classmates and I participated in the activity of Low – Carbon Living organized by the WWF. On the first day, we chose to go to school by bike or on foot rather than by bus or car. Before we left the classroom, we made sure the lights and the computer were switched off. In order to make full use of paper, we began to write on both sides. Besides, while shopping, we no longer used plastic bags but carried environmentally friendly ones.

I think what we did on that day was meaningful, which an help us to form a good habit. We should also call on the people around us to do something for low – carbon living. Only in this way will the earth he a good place to live on.

解析:

情景作文（20分）

一、评分原则

1．本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。

2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3．评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连惯性。

4．拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

5．词数少于60，从总分中减去1分。

二、内容要点

1．步行或骑车上学    2．关灯、关电脑    3．纸张两面用    4．使用环保购物袋